It was Winter , it was a Saturday and it was six in the evening . It was one of those days when I just couldn’t find company for a Saturday evening outing . For me , a Saturday without an outing is like a ‘ Coffee without Sugar ‘ .After all the ideas draining out of my mind , I decided I should be adding sugar(to the coffee) all by myself and hence got up, got dressed and left with the destination undecided .
As I was walking down the lane , I observed that none of my neighbours were around . I had a stupid imagination of them partying in a club . There was a feeling of freshness intilled in me maybe because of the weather which was asusually (in Bangalore) so romantic . The Orange evening sky , a cool breeze which was kind of soothing my senses and the chirping birds which left me feeling peaceful made for a perfect evening . The poet in me was in flowing form. Or maybe it was one of those silly imaginations of mine (untolerable says my sister ) . Anyway , I put a full stop to my ‘in-form’ imaginations and proceeded .
Just as I moved a few paces , I noticed a familiar face looking at me in excitement . I could recognize that he was my primary school classmate . He approached me and said “ Heyy , Arjun right ? ”
“Yeah”
“You remember me ? ”
“Ofcourse Naveen ”
“Heyyy , I’m Sachin ”
(Uff!! Not again ….)
“Oh ya ya , sorry ”
“Haha , You are still the same .!! ”
Strolling along the pavement , we made few more enquiries and exchanged memories of our school days and our teachers . He was so excited about our unexpected rendezvous . We entered a near by park and we did the ‘ Walk the Talk ’ . Though it was long time since we met , we developed very good chemistry between us . He already made it to my ‘Good Friends’ list .
He offered to have some Tea , which he still remembers that it was my favourite drink . While sipping the tea , he invited me for a picnic that he was to go with his friends the next day .It was to some WaterFall . I was busy with a family function the next day , so told him I can’t make it . We left it at that . He had so many things to say about our school . He was up to date with all it’s advancements . After some more talking and walking , we decided to disperse . I told him “Lets catch up on Monday , I’ll take you to my place ” .
He said “ Sure ”.
We shook hands & departed . More than happy with the evening’s proceedings, the freshness still intact on me , the poet in me asleep, I headed home looking forward to meet him on Monday .
And Monday evening I get a call saying “ Sachin is no more . He drowned in a WaterFall near Mysore”.
30 comments:
March 1, 2008 at 6:29 PM
Ah, it was destined to meet u tht day to be ur good friend, n he is no more. shall i call it luck tht u were not part of the trip, shall i call it fate if u had been part of the trip may b he would not have drowned. Ifs n buts, but the fact is ur friend is no more.many fruits in a tree few fall of when still it is budding few remain to become ripe in the tree. :)
March 1, 2008 at 6:52 PM
its like getting & losing at the same time
it was destiny that u met again, and it was destiny that ur encounter did nt last long..
March 1, 2008 at 8:08 PM
such an abrupt and shocking ending.. god.. i was shaken as i read the last line.. this is fate..
March 1, 2008 at 8:31 PM
oh my gosh...shocking..n hurting the most..its such an awful fate..poor chap!may be his last wish was to meet a dear friend like you n share his thoughts..this is one good acquaintance that shows life is full of twists n all flavors..i donno what u would conclude..FATE
sachin's soul rest in peace...
expect the unexpected could be the bottom line the bitter interpretation of the other world
March 1, 2008 at 9:31 PM
wow! that's too bad...
-Niru
March 2, 2008 at 10:48 AM
Fate it is....
U meet aftr so long.... instantly got along nicely.... he invited u but u dint went.... He drownd and u still posting on this blog....
Fate it is.... for u n for him....
Vry shocking.....
March 3, 2008 at 11:24 AM
That's so sad :(
March 3, 2008 at 1:14 PM
life is cruel
and it does not discriminate
March 4, 2008 at 12:09 PM
Thats really bad...........
March 5, 2008 at 10:19 AM
Hey Arjun...
Ending is really Shocking...
Couldn't recover...
Anyways thats called fate... U r right...
Keep blogging..
keerthana
March 5, 2008 at 11:58 AM
Ooh!! an abrupt end :( i dint expect this..i enjoyed your blog til before those last two lines!! My deepest condolence..let his soul rip!!
March 6, 2008 at 1:42 PM
i was shaken as i read the last line.
Fate it is,for u n for him.
March 6, 2008 at 2:04 PM
This was thought provoking...
Sounds a bit funny.. but I wonder what will happen on the last (or second last) day of my life...
Sorry for your friend.. such is life..
March 6, 2008 at 7:01 PM
poor chap..oh man..dats really awful and am really shocked de way it ended..Fate dats the apt word for the situation man..
March 6, 2008 at 8:16 PM
This is one blog with a kick ass theme \m/
March 7, 2008 at 1:19 PM
@nacho...
I couldn't find a better word for ur blog buddy.....
March 8, 2008 at 11:41 AM
Dude, shell shocked when I read the last line. But it happens!!. Sometimes life is a bitch.
And gud post btw!!
March 8, 2008 at 12:52 PM
tragic..
i wonder if ur feeling that maybe u shudnt have met sachin after so many years, only to lose him in a couple of days..i would have felt that way.
keep posting
www.crissdude.blogspot.com
March 11, 2008 at 1:16 PM
OMG...Thats all I can muster up to say.....
March 11, 2008 at 3:06 PM
You have a great blog Dude ! and regarding this post i liked the ending of this post !!Thw way u express is nice !!
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Mohans World
March 13, 2008 at 9:47 AM
Dude... just thank god that u got a chance to meet him before he passed away...n may his soul rest in peace.....
Take care bro
March 13, 2008 at 6:55 PM
Hey Arjum....
A Humble Suggestion....
I'm guessin u wanted to build up the story so that the reader gets "knocked down" by the ending...But it wud have probably had a lil more effect if u wud have explained the endin or extended it by another 2-3 lines...if things r left this way, it cud come off as crude to some ppl
PS - May God rest ur friend's soul in peace...
March 15, 2008 at 6:22 PM
goodness! tht was so sudden.. didnt expect the end! m so sorry 4 u'r loss!
March 17, 2008 at 12:53 PM
solid template ..it dam good and suit to ur matters..keep it up
March 20, 2008 at 3:28 PM
yea man....strange co-incidence...eh??? All of us call it fate!
God bless! Cheers!
March 22, 2008 at 12:59 PM
shit,he died :(.
i dont havbe words to describe this post,its just your imaginations and thoughts which creates magic.
March 24, 2008 at 8:33 PM
that is sad man. i guess u cant help some aspects of life.
March 28, 2008 at 11:52 AM
Ok i didnt xpect that at all..as i was reading this post ..the one thing that was runnin in my mind was that I love ur blog and the posts...and toward the end wen i read the last line...I was moved to tears...m soorry mate..i ges it is fate after all...
RIP Sachin
And God Bless U Ari
Tee
April 1, 2008 at 12:22 PM
is this real or fiction?
The end is really unexpected and shocking but in a weird way makes the narration complete. Though if it is a true life story it makes really sad. I dont like sad stories :(
June 29, 2008 at 2:37 PM
ohh...that was sad... may his soul rest in peace...
it's all fate...and many people have had similar experiences like u...
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